Excellent work! I had my doubts about the procedural generation of rooms but I think it would actually work pretty elegantly in play. Wonderful descriptions as well. My only real issue is that some of this can use proofreading - I found a few awkward turns of phrase and some typos sprinkled throughout. Other than that, however, this has been my favorite submission thus far. :)
Thanks so much, glad you liked it. I’ll probably go through the entire text and release an update soon. Thanks for the feedback!
Edit: thanks again for working with me on it and I really do appreciate the feedback. Your contributions have definitely made the end product feel more polished. Cheers!
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Excellent work! I had my doubts about the procedural generation of rooms but I think it would actually work pretty elegantly in play. Wonderful descriptions as well. My only real issue is that some of this can use proofreading - I found a few awkward turns of phrase and some typos sprinkled throughout. Other than that, however, this has been my favorite submission thus far. :)
Thanks so much, glad you liked it. I’ll probably go through the entire text and release an update soon. Thanks for the feedback!
Edit: thanks again for working with me on it and I really do appreciate the feedback. Your contributions have definitely made the end product feel more polished. Cheers!